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Look in the mirror,
What do I see?
Distorted images,
Are haunting me.

Look in the mirror,
What do I view?
If I said I like what I see,
That would be untrue.

Look in the mirror,
What do I observe?
The unattractive thing looking back at me,
Is no more than I deserve.

Look in the mirror,
What do I perceive?
Feel like the ugly duckling,
And all I do is grieve.

Look in the mirror,
I can’t take it anymore,
So I’ll break the glass,
Watch the shards fall to the floor.

Look in the mirror,
No longer there,
Broken things, so hard to fix,
I am in repair.

Look in the mirror,
Can you tell I’m broken?
My love for you, killing me now,
The truth I’ve never spoken.

Look in the mirror,
Will you finally notice me?
Once I’m gone, read the note,
My last and final plea.

It will read,
It was all for you,
My life, and my death.
I will think of you,
As I take my final breath.
You never really saw me before,
But now you know how I feel.
I hope it eats you up inside,
But that you learn to deal.
I couldn’t do it,
I’m not that strong,
I can’t stand being alone,
I just wanted to belong.
You couldn’t do that for me,
And now it’s too late,
But know one thing,
For you, in heaven, I will wait.
Maybe then you’ll see me,
And we can be together.
Until then, please think of me,
And forget me never.

Look in the mirror,
What do I see?
Distorted images,
Are haunting me.
©2004-2009 ~unknownskank
:iconunknownskank:

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random suicidal stuff. not good but bleh.

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:iconfukthisloveshit:
great work i like it

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i hate the way you mean more to me
...than i'll ever mean to you
i hate the way i feel for you
..and that you'll never feel it too
:iconunknownskank:
thank you =D

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take care,
with so much love, ashlea xox
:iconchild-of-the-night:
wow! the feelings in this one is so strong! :clap: keep up the great work :) :worship:

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Join the Dark Side...
and get a free cookie!:cookie:
:iconryu4366:
good poem...

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"I'd be gothic, but I can't afford to shop at hot topic"... now I have a shirt that says that, and if you ask hot topic to get it... I WILL KILL YOU!
:iconxxjokerxx:
:crying: <<<< I'm so serious... ::wipes tears from eyes:: All the time... you so earn the title Emotional Poet... I can so closley relate... ... ... ... I wish you lived here wit me... we could be very cool friends... but this'll have to do... for now... :hug:

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"Do not go silently into that dark night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light."
~Dylan Thomas

"Look at all the FAILURE!"
~sal623
:iconheidi-hudson:
I can relate to the part of looking in the mirror and not liking what you see. But the rest...i have learned to detatch myself from people enough that i wont be hurt by them any longer.
It's a great poem though, you are a very good writer, very visual and emotional. :thumbsup: :heart:
:iconxox-unique-xox:
I LOVE IT,I LOVE IT!!! :+fav: :heart:

:blackrose:VaNe§sA:rose:
:hug:
:iconbroke4u:
aw thats so sad :hug: and really good I wish you didnt feel that way about yourself

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I'm crazy because I free myself from one box to confinded into another
:iconvanillapanther:
excelent great work in the ryme sceme and emotion in it. great work depression is a great thing when you can put it in a poem.

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