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It’s not normal,
How could it be?
To think of death,
As the only way to be free.

I’m so trapped,
This life is closing down,
The walls fall around me,
As im deafened by the sound,
The sound that punches,
From inside my chest,
Suddenly,
The pain has found a voice,
A sound that could deafen,
The entire planet,
It screams of all the times,
I hurt so much,
Nothing could repair me,
It howls,
At the every tear that slowly destroyed me,
Corroded me.

How can no one see this!!
How can no one realise,
I’m really not dealing with this life,
My only consciousness,
Is brought about by a knife.

Please kill me,
Please make me someone new,
At least destroy the memories,
Of the nightmares ive been through.

I cant pretend much longer,
Things are not ok,
I cannot live,
There’s not much more of me to give,
So maybe its time,
I gave this life away.

I wish that I could be,
So much more than what I am,
I try to improve this tattered shell,
I just keep hoping that I can.

The hope is wearing thin now,
The dreams are long since gone,
I think that this is it now,
Quite simply,
I can’t go on.
forget it all. forget the past. forget things ever happened. forget the times shared. forget what was there. the feelings, the emotions. just forget it all. its all over now. i want a new start. nothing from the old life. undo all the pain. forget i ever felt it. forget the fact that i ever even cared. why bother with it any longer?
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VS-Lucidia Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010   Writer
You...are the best poet...I've ever met...
Its such great poetry, I'm adding u to my deviant watch, gj very nice
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dupbr13 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
This gonna sound weird but, thanks for writing this, 'cause sometimes,its nice to have someone else express your thoughts for you.When you are the one who just can't seem to put them into words.
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(and if this story is true.)
Everyone is here for a reason, and when we are ment to go we will.No one should ever take their own life,(trust me ive tried.) But there will always be some one who cares. Yes, even if you think there isnt. Sure everyone can try to forget, but not everyone can forgive.Everyone including you has a reason to live, weather you see it or still have yet to see it.

The best things are unseen.
Thats why we close our eys when we kiss, cry and dream.
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Teenage-Confusion Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008
i think its really good. i can relate in my own ways. excellent job.
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unknownskank Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009   Writer
I found my password for this account again. Just to let you know, I am not dead, I'm still alive & I'm here. If your interested, I also have a new account in which I use frequently now; [link]
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BluefromTheWest Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2008   Writer
An understandable feeling that alot of people go through --- i mean i've talked to alot of my friends and we all have come to a point like this in our life (some of us aren't past it *shrug*)

I've learned to not put too much credence in other's words and actions, because they can be accidental, they can be intentional, but you'll never know.
I've also learned to take it all in stride, take it with a grain of salt.

i'm not saying this to console you but i'm just stating you aren't alone (or hopefully, you weren't alone)

it is a great portrayal of your feelings, very charged
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unknownskank Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009   Writer
I found my password for this account again. Just to let you know, I am not dead, I'm still alive & I'm here. If your interested, I also have a new account in which I use frequently now; [link]
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Ancient-Hoofbeats Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2007  Student General Artist
again, interesting...hope you're ok.
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Fruit-Loop-Princess Featured By Owner May 12, 2008  Student Digital Artist
She isn't. She died.
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Ancient-Hoofbeats Featured By Owner May 12, 2008  Student General Artist
and how would YOU know this?
Sorry, but I've met too many trolls to believe a random person...I know she left DA, but unless you have proof of her death, I'm not inclined to believe you...
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Fruit-Loop-Princess Featured By Owner May 12, 2008  Student Digital Artist
Well thats your problem, isn't it.
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