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As the tears keep falling.. by ~unknownskank:iconunknownskank:

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Just the thought of not being with you...
The thought of not being able to hold you tight...
Keeps the tears falling tonight
Flowing down like rain from my heart
That feels as though... it might break apart...
As it deeply aches for you

'Cause all the miles that separate us
Is killing me like a mid- October frost
I long to be by your side and I can't...

As the tears keep falling...
Dripping into the glassy pool at the edge of my heart
Shattering the stillness... the silence within
That ripples out to create...
An ear- splitting sound....
One of love... not of hate

"I LOVE YOU"
Can be heard being shouted...
Over and over... again and again...

As the tears keep falling...
©2004-2009 ~unknownskank
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Have u ever loved someone so much... that u would do anything to be w/ that person?

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~iamblakey Apr 17, 2004, 5:23:34 AM
beautiful

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[Blakes was HERE]
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!jobe-1-1 Apr 17, 2004, 5:47:57 AM
like i said b4. amazing. just amazing.
:sadangel: wish you could get what u wanted.

:+fav:

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I will be forgotten, along with all i ever loved...
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~Sacher Apr 17, 2004, 5:59:16 AM
That's great. The poem I mean, sorry about the predicament.

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I had a handle on life, then it broke
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~XxNotWorthSavingxX Apr 17, 2004, 6:12:12 AM
that was amazing, absoutly amazing, for i feel the same way, but the only way ill ever be with him, is to die.

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Yours Forever and Never Laurin

I Carved Your Name In A Bullet So You'd Be The Last Thing Running Through my Mind

Turn Burning nightmares into sodden Dreams. Kiss with open eyes, your only young o
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~RedKnight Apr 17, 2004, 8:12:06 AM
beautiful! +fav! btw, whos it for?
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~ThisBleedingHeart Apr 17, 2004, 8:48:16 AM
thats so ameasing and touching...it reminds me of how i felt last night...you have soo much talent. hope things start to go your way
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~xox-UniQue-xox Apr 17, 2004, 10:22:43 AM
awww...its BeAuTiFuL!:heart:

:rose:VaNe§sA:rose:
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~littlegeek42 Apr 17, 2004, 12:32:40 PM
a definite :+favlove: keep doing what you're doing. it's wonderful :)
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~unknownskank Apr 17, 2004, 2:57:36 PM
:) thanks

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take care,
with so much love, ashlea xox
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